Friday, October 4, 2013

Shinier blurb!

I've been tweaking my blurb for Mean Boys and I'm in love with this newer one I wrote.  I basically added a bit more detail and tried to make the wording sound smoother.  Until Mean Boys is published I'll probably keep tweaking it every now and then.  It's weird how authors can write thousands upon thousands of words but struggle with a short one paragraph blurb. :)

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(here's it in text)
 “So...you're forcing me to be your slave?” I inhaled deeply even though 
my body had calmed. “Is that the basic gist?”

A reformed bully. Two damaged boys. Bound by blackmail.The only thing Bianca Wilbur wanted was to forget her past and sail through her first and only year at the prestigious Battle St. John Preparatory, by making new friends and maintaining perfect grades. That is until one scandalousraunchy night of Truth or Dare with two of the school's most infamous bad boys, the peculiar Judas and the reckless Zeus aka The St. John Gods,

leads to the unthinkable.

She's intrigued by one and despises the other.

 
As Bianca is forcibly dragged into their troubled world secrets spill and dirty lies come out. What happens when the bully becomes the prey?

Mature YA/New Adult. Excessive swearing, sensitive subject matter, and sexual situations.